OOC SECTION: In Game Name: ST PVT 1435 Inferno Do you have a Working microphone: Yes Rank: PVT  Steam name: Inferno Steam Link: https://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198203999853/ How old are you: 13 Steam id (Not SteamID64/3): STEAM_0:1:121867062 What is your playtime: 3 Hours  How many punishments have you had: 0 Do you have any experience as Fleet before: Yes  What do you predict your weekly activity will be: Around 84 Hours. What do you aim to achieve if you get Fleet: My Aim With Fleet Is To Help Players With There Experience And Make Friends With Other Navy Ensigns Or Higher ups And To Lead My Troops into Battle And Make The Empire Victorious [b]IC SECTION:[/b] Why do you want to be fleet?: I Would Like To Become Fleet Because I  Find Fleet Intresting And I Find Amusment And I Like To Improve On My Leading Skills And How I Can Become A Helpful Fleet Member. Why do you stand out amongst your peers who have applied: I Think I Stand Out Personally Because I Feel Like I Can Be Serious And Have a Bit Of a Laugh At the Same Time I Also Feel Like I Can Help Other players Why should we pick you out of the others who applied: I Think This Because I Want To Make the Empire Win And Be Victorious And Win This War With As Less Casualties Possible. You haven't fulfilled your duties as a navy for a week what do you do: See If It Has Been Done For Me And If It Hasn't I Will Do It Straight Away Unless There Is Another Duty To be Done. A trooper didn't salute you what do you do: Move On And Mention It To Him Later. Create lore for your character: Example: Jim is a new graduate from the Imperial Navy Academy and has been assigned to this vessel (250 Words Min.): Inferno Is a New Graduate From The Imperial Navy Academy And He Has Been Selected For Ensign. Inferno Later Goes On To Star Destroyer Nebula He Arrives On To The Ship And Is Greeted to a Whole Hanger Full Of Troopers And Officers (Commanders ETC) Inferno Later Gets Greeted By Grand Moff Tarkin And Rae Slone They Greet Me And Welcome me To Star Destoryer Nebula , I Get A Tour Of the Ship. Firstly We Go To The Bunks.  We Later Went To The Medbay. There Were Around 5 - 15 Troopers Inside Of Bacta Tanks. And Even More On Beds . There Was Also A Medical Droid There. I Was Then Escorted Into The Bridge. There Was A Bunk With My Name On. We Went Into the Bunk And I Was a Bed With a Window With The View Of The Star Destroyer. We Then Went Into The Bridge And There Was Around 5 Doors One Was The Meeting Room. One Was The GA Room. One Was The Alarm. One Was The Hyperspace Button And There Was Lord Vader's Room.  Then Moff Tarkin Said To Me Here Is Your Space With Around 5 Workers For You All Ready For Missions. Then I Went Down Back To My Bunk And Slept. The Next Day The Ship Was Attacked By Rebels Warning Signals Went Out Alarms And Lights Went Off. Then There He Was Han Solo. He Went Into The Engine Room And Set It All On Fire. We All Evacuated And Here We Are Now. Anything else you wish to add?: Nope

[u][b][size=300][color=#e67e22]ON HOLD[/color][/size][/b][/u] [color=#e67e22][size=150]There are a few problems with this application that are stopping it from being accepted. 1. The 'Lore' section does not entirely make sense and isn't even a backstory to the character. (which it should be) 2. Only the first word of a sentence [/size][/color][size=150][color=#e67e22]or a proper noun (object/place)[/color][/size][color=#e67e22][size=150] must have a capital letter. Not the entire thing. 3. The majority of the IC section is similar to my own App. VERY similar. You have 3 days to rewrite the app. If it is not done by then it will be denied and you will have to wait 1 week to reapply.[/size][/color]  

[quote] [/quote] [color=#e74c3c][size=300][b][u]DENIED[/u][/b][/size] [size=150]User has failed to edit application in time given Feel free to reapply in a week (17/01/2019)[/size][/color]